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I was totally amazed when...
(This needs to a shocking statement. The reason behind this is simple. If you make a somewhat shocking statement, and bold it like in the example, people want to know the rest of the story. You just left the person hanging without an ending. It is basic human instinct to want to finish the thought.)
Does it frustrate you that you have been lied to, ripped off, and literally been taken advantage of by blood sucking MLM, and affiliate program owners? The reason you, and many others, may not have found financial independence yet, is because these owners are only interested in getting rich quick, leaving you poor fast!
(This paragraph follows right after your "Hypnotic Attention Grabber. This paragraph finishes your opening paragraph with the rest of the story. Everyone likes reading a story, so it is appropriate to open your sales letter with a story. Think about it, isn't it easier and more enjoyable to read a story rather than a straight sales pitch? The idea is to pull the reader into your sales letter. Once a person starts reading, the want to finish)
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